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Look Beyound Me

I am a black woman i speak my mind but i mind what i say, music moves and art defines me, i write to express my emotions a pen is a friend that tell my stories & a paper accepts my expression yes i am! I am a black woman but my heart is pure like a piece of jewel i'm loved by those who knows my worth, while others choose to judge without knowing forgetting there's more than what meets the eye i am a dreamer, who dreams bigger than imagination & my visions inspire my creativity that embraces the beauty of art I am, i am a lover of life i see impossibilitie possible i accept challengies but not defeat & i look beyound the limits because i intend to break bounderies i am a black woman.

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Date: 2/2/2014 10:23:00 AM
You show a lot of spirit and there is exaltation in your poem. You might consider changing the title, though titles are much less important than the body of the work...a suggestion for title 'Look beyond' or even 'Look Beyond Me' if you want to change the content to give something more for the reader to consider. Keep doin what you do!
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Date: 2/2/2014 10:02:00 AM
Thank u Anne, i sure feel like i'm home and promise to post more poems. oxox
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Date: 2/2/2014 9:57:00 AM
Thank u Alice.
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Date: 2/1/2014 9:26:00 AM
Very Beautiful Poem Thandiwe. xoxo
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Date: 1/31/2014 2:58:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Thandiwe- I choose your first lovely written poem- hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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