Krish Radhakrishna Poet Rhyme

Look At This Place

Ah, Look at this place! what a mess!
never seen it like this before,
immaculate clean, more or less,
doesn’t look a home anymore!

the toys are back in their right place,
the floor has such a polished shine,
the books are neat in the book case,
everything in orderly line.

Kitchen looks like model display,
not a sign of anything cooked,
look at this mess! what can I say!
not a spot of dust! I have looked!

cushions on the sofa are neat,
the carpet has been vacuumed,
no crumbs of biscuits, bit of sweet,
every piece of them is exhumed!

Look at this place! oh! what a mess,
please do something to make it home!
I hate this house of cleanliness,
without children it looks a tomb!

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written 27/03/2021
8 syllables each line
Look at this place contest
Matt Caliri sponsored

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Malabika Ray Choudhury March 28, 2021 at 12:17 PM WOW! Love this one, Krish! It’s so interesting, what a great idea! The rhyming so perfect! For me, it’s a winner ~ Mala Krish Radhakrishna March 29, 2021 at 9:15 AM Thanks Mala. My mother used to tell us that a model house is an unloved house without life. True!