Look

Look

looking at time standing still
the raven the largest of all
sets us aside and waits
fluid station and people tussling here
and there looking at smiles
awake
lay your head down
propounded by Vikings
slinging the colder
much older
reminiscing love as a vision
eyes wide open
pupils dilated in a transfixed state
evolution of counterparts alluded
climb the tide in tights to the coldest
caverns of lime and sigh
mites and tites stand to attention
as we see it in appreciation
of temptation
                       Written by tonuhalan/31/04/06/sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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