Look

OMG! Please just show your face!
Lord, I'm sorry for using your name in vain!
But you haven't given me an answer yet. Not for my love but for hers'.

Took me down under.
Hades, greeted me with delight, my friends said bye, bye.
The girl of my dreams didn't even look at me.
I don't even think she remembers me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 27, 2010 at 7:57 PM
Cute poem...Marty
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