Lonliness Soul

Her body is present but with no soul,

Her thoughts are blank, the lonliness stole.

She feels alone, looks around but no one is there.

She feels solitaire, this lonliness one she doesn't want to bear.

Her body is there, but her mind is not.

She feels alone, alone is how she will rot.

She is present, but not her soul,

Her mind is seraching for what that lonliness stole.

When will she wake how will she feel,

When she thought this lonliness was fake it turned to be real.

Who will be there when this reality hits,

Who will embrace her for her heart breaks to bits.

Alone she must stay alone she will feel,

Her body fades and turns to dust,

Her soul dissapears and she cries,

For lonely she waits and lonely she dies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 8, 2010 at 9:48 PM
deep write, enjoyed this one...P.D.
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October 8, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry tonight.. hope u check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv..
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October 8, 2010 at 2:14 PM
Deep write, very insightful of love an loss
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