Amanda Pearson Poet Rhyme

Lonliness In Oblivion

Secretly I wish I could disappear,
Beyond the gander that is oblivion,
Between the before and after,
No one missing me, there wouldnt be a disaster

Just silence, no justice,
Just nothing in a place of wonder,
Would you then be happier,

A world of laughter in place of sorrow,
Or Would you still suffer in a world of tomorrow,
To find me gone in the shallow,

Forever, forever,
Promised forever,
Promised for something better,
Gone by the wind,

Lost between the line,
You will find better,
You are a trend setter,
In a world of followers
Around beauty and flowers,

Forever, forever,
how I wish your love is eternal,
a happily ever after,

Cease the day and welcome the tomorrow,

Together, we are the sun, together we are one,

Tomorrow tomorrow just wait til tomorrow, you'll see it gets better
Says everyone ever.

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Nancy Kaufman May 25, 2023 at 2:02 PM Hi Amanda, Melancholy and very deep write. Enjoyed reading it.

Lady Labyrinth May 19, 2023 at 4:30 PM "Together, we are the sun, together we are one". This is very beautiful. And I think, though some may disagree, very true. To find the together, sometimes you have to venture out on your own and forge the way to that state of being with another, whether family, lover, friend, elemental/spiritual. The journey is always on one's own to learn through experiences (both good and treacherous), to reach that state of being, 'together' (even if it is just within yourself).

Paul Bell May 5, 2023 at 7:07 AM Funny how tomorrow's just another day, and life is going to be sunshine and roses. I do like the analogy. If I wake up tomorrow, it will be a great day, and if I don't, it's somebody else's problem. Like your stuff. Amanda Pearson May 5, 2023 at 9:42 AM Thank you very much, I appreciate it!