Lonley Trolley Ride

am i too hard on myself?
who is to say, no person
has lived my day.
mind shallow, tired, weak
only enough brain cells for self critique
the reflection is hazy
who is she?
think quickly, look down, shadow ahead is only me
passing windows with blared glass
bad image projected OH! please just pass
up ahead, the presence of people AH! at last
tainted thoughts have just passed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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