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Longing What Was

Us
Two Peas
Talking, Hearing, Touching
Love exemplified, Union personified.
We

Singular
Empty Pod
Silent, Deaf, Abandoned
Trust betrayed, Marriage broken
Alone




24~12~2014
Maurice Yvone
Sponsor: Dr.Ram Mehta
Contest Name: Cinquain 
Theme: LONGING

lost lovecinquain

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/6/2015 12:24:00 AM

Yours is the most emotive poem I've read on the winner's list...all the heartbreak is leads to that one last word...congrats on a great win. Hugs, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/2/2015 11:16:00 PM

Maurice, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/2/2015 2:35:00 PM

Maurice, very nicely written and so emotional...longing what was... Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 2:05:00 PM

this was one of my very favorites in the contest, armand. BIg congrats for your win.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 11:38:00 AM

love your take on the theme Armand - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/2/2015 8:26:00 AM

#7 Armand your take on this one is quite unique...longing with a difference. A very deserving winner...congratulations! // paul

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/2/2015 3:10:00 AM

I love this Maurice,congrats on the win...huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/1/2015 9:32:00 PM

Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, Maurice

Joseph May

Date: 1/1/2015 8:53:00 PM

I like this one...congrats on a great win Maurice

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/27/2014 2:41:00 PM

Perfection! Well done.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/25/2014 2:36:00 PM

you hit the nail on its head, maurice... this is gooood!... merry christmas and beat wishes.. huggs

Joseph May

Date: 12/25/2014 2:28:00 PM

Great cinquain Maurice.... 7.... I hope to see this high on the list...Have a wonderful Christmas...

Tim Smith

Date: 12/25/2014 11:55:00 AM

I know where you are coming from my friend...Merry Christmas to you, your girls and Mom

David Williams

Date: 12/25/2014 3:10:00 AM

well done, I like it...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2014 7:41:00 PM

Maurice,, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~

Rob Carmack

Date: 12/24/2014 1:26:00 PM

Merry Christmas to you Maurice and good luck in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2014 10:57:00 AM

You did an awesome job, Maurice. I think Dr. Ram is gonna love it!!! It is your first cinquain? I would never know it!

John Lawless

Date: 12/24/2014 9:20:00 AM

You've contained a lot in a Cinquain Maurice. Hope you have a pleasant Christmas

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/24/2014 7:57:00 AM

Very emotive Maurice...But i hope you believe in second chances at dinding love.Guess kids are a fulfillment too.Heartfelt emotions.Have a blessed Christmad my dear friend .