Maurice Yvonne Poet Cinquain

Longing What Was

Us
Two Peas
Talking, Hearing, Touching
Love exemplified, Union personified.
We

Singular
Empty Pod
Silent, Deaf, Abandoned
Trust betrayed, Marriage broken
Alone




24~12~2014
Maurice Yvone
Sponsor: Dr.Ram Mehta
Contest Name: Cinquain 
Theme: LONGING  

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 6, 2015 at 12:24 AM Yours is the most emotive poem I've read on the winner's list...all the heartbreak is leads to that one last word...congrats on a great win. Hugs, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A January 2, 2015 at 11:16 PM Maurice, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda

Sandra Haight January 2, 2015 at 2:35 PM Maurice, very nicely written and so emotional...longing what was... Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Andrea Dietrich January 2, 2015 at 2:05 PM this was one of my very favorites in the contest, armand. BIg congrats for your win.

Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 11:38 AM love your take on the theme Armand - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus January 2, 2015 at 8:26 AM #7 Armand your take on this one is quite unique...longing with a difference. A very deserving winner...congratulations! // paul

Kayod5 Kayode January 2, 2015 at 3:10 AM I love this Maurice,congrats on the win...huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta January 1, 2015 at 9:32 PM Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, Maurice

Joseph May January 1, 2015 at 8:53 PM I like this one...congrats on a great win Maurice

M. L. Kiser December 27, 2014 at 2:41 PM Perfection! Well done.

Nette Onclaud December 25, 2014 at 2:36 PM you hit the nail on its head, maurice... this is gooood!... merry christmas and beat wishes.. huggs

Joseph May December 25, 2014 at 2:28 PM Great cinquain Maurice.... 7.... I hope to see this high on the list...Have a wonderful Christmas...

Tim Smith December 25, 2014 at 11:55 AM I know where you are coming from my friend...Merry Christmas to you, your girls and Mom

David Williams December 25, 2014 at 3:10 AM well done, I like it...

Poet Destroyer A December 24, 2014 at 7:41 PM Maurice,, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~

Rob Carmack December 24, 2014 at 1:26 PM Merry Christmas to you Maurice and good luck in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich December 24, 2014 at 10:57 AM You did an awesome job, Maurice. I think Dr. Ram is gonna love it!!! It is your first cinquain? I would never know it!

John Lawless December 24, 2014 at 9:20 AM You've contained a lot in a Cinquain Maurice. Hope you have a pleasant Christmas

Charmaine Chircop December 24, 2014 at 7:57 AM Very emotive Maurice...But i hope you believe in second chances at dinding love.Guess kids are a fulfillment too.Heartfelt emotions.Have a blessed Christmad my dear friend .

Brenda Meier-Hans December 24, 2014 at 7:23 AM Two very big differences. I hope you have time with your children over the holidays Maurice and wish you a blessed and very Merry Christmas.