Longing To See You

LONGING TO SEE YOU

I’ve climbed patiently this far
Over the heap of piebald years
To have even a twinkling glimpse
Of your acclaimed effulgent face
A flitting moment to me bestowed
Enough to send my spirit leaping
Among the daisies in the morning sun
When time are short for squirt of joy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Falotico Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 1:03 PM
I like your style of writing, will come back to read some more.... Michael
Mehta Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 6:31 PM
Enjoyed the serenity of your mind, dalila
Seraphin Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 10:18 AM
* “Smile * Beautiful Dalila. * Shining In Brilliance Her Glowing * Radiant Loves Glittering Colours * In * Spectacular Verse. * Ow * How You Touch My Heart & Stir It Well * With The Gentle Sweeping of Your Beautiful * Romantic Brush * Thank You * A Fave to Be Cherished. * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * With Warm Soft Lips * In Tender Luv. * Sarah” *
Brown Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 7:29 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. It was a very interesting write. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Dalila. Love, Carol
Tacito Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 6:16 AM
Quite the elegant verbiage used here. I understand these lines. Well done!
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