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Longing To See You

LONGING TO SEE YOU I’ve climbed patiently this far Over the heap of piebald years To have even a twinkling glimpse Of your acclaimed effulgent face A flitting moment to me bestowed Enough to send my spirit leaping Among the daisies in the morning sun When time are short for squirt of joy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/30/2011 1:03:00 PM
I like your style of writing, will come back to read some more.... Michael
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Date: 5/25/2011 6:31:00 PM
Enjoyed the serenity of your mind, dalila
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Date: 5/24/2011 10:18:00 AM
* “Smile * Beautiful Dalila. * Shining In Brilliance Her Glowing * Radiant Loves Glittering Colours * In * Spectacular Verse. * Ow * How You Touch My Heart & Stir It Well * With The Gentle Sweeping of Your Beautiful * Romantic Brush * Thank You * A Fave to Be Cherished. * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * With Warm Soft Lips * In Tender Luv. * Sarah” *
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Date: 5/24/2011 7:29:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. It was a very interesting write. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Dalila. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2011 6:16:00 AM
Quite the elegant verbiage used here. I understand these lines. Well done!
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