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Longing To Linger

The foggy mist rose swiftly from the creek.
It encircled the pampas grass like a wreath.
The verdant razor blades of grass were bleak.
As the creamy plumes were wet beneath

On the qui vive for any movement of nature
Longing to linger and watch some more
Duty calls me to responsibility~ wager
If I respond to that call as before 

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2023

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Anitha Jayasankar Date: 9/18/2023 1:14:00 AM Aw Sara, such a descriptive write ...yes, who would not long to linger more and watch the beauty of nature... isn't it? Enjoyed reading. How are you doing? So glad to read your poems after a long time... Respects and Hugs... ~ Ani Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/18/2023 3:50:00 AM Anitha, We are all doing well at this point in our lives. Doris and her husband have colds and our son is having a flare up of his psoriasis. Life slips us a little bad along with the good things at times. Thanks for taking time to comment on this one. Sara

Jack Horne Date: 9/16/2023 2:20:00 PM love the atmosphere you created here Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/17/2023 3:56:00 AM Why, thank you, Jack. It was a nice feeling to see the creek rise come billowing up the hill. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/14/2023 2:53:00 AM - I enjoy your beautiful lines, Sara :) - hugs Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/14/2023 4:52:00 AM Thanks for the smile and nice review of my work. SK

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/13/2023 8:48:00 PM Lovingly, wistfully, BOLDLY penned, Sara. May emotion win the wager!! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/14/2023 4:52:00 AM Gershon, sometimes it does. SK

The Situation Date: 9/13/2023 7:08:00 PM Great rhyming and view. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/14/2023 4:52:00 AM Glad you liked it. SK

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/13/2023 6:41:00 PM So many delicate lines of utter beauty, exquisite in content dear Sara :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/14/2023 4:51:00 AM Why, thank you, Rose. Thanks for the visit. SK

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/13/2023 8:35:00 AM Such is the beauty of nature that lures us to linger--wonderfully descriptive poem, Sara. A lovely write. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/13/2023 11:06:00 AM Vijay, Thank you. I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment. Sara

Hiya Sharma Date: 9/13/2023 7:50:00 AM "The foggy mist rose swiftly from the creek", "As the creamy plumes were wet beneath" Your imagery is ever so spellbinding dear beautiful Sara. I'm in mesmeric awe everytime I read your poems hued with resplendence.. This one evokes so many emotions.. Of a longing to be lost in the zephyr of nature and devour its essence but only if life permits us... So beautiful as always :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/13/2023 8:25:00 AM Why, Hiya, the high praise is so uplifting. Your visits add a special touch to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/13/2023 5:33:00 AM Lovely imagery, Sara! We long to linger and absorb the energy of the moment before us! God bless! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/13/2023 8:24:00 AM Kim, Oh, they are so short and fleeting. Thanks for the nice review. Sara

Daisy Meadows Date: 9/13/2023 5:18:00 AM A lovely poem. Well done. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/13/2023 8:24:00 AM Why, thank you, Jeanette. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara