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The foggy mist rose swiftly from the creek. It encircled the pampas grass like a wreath. The verdant razor blades of grass were bleak. As the creamy plumes were wet beneath On the qui vive for any movement of nature Longing to linger and watch some more Duty calls me to responsibility~ wager If I respond to that call as before

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Date: 9/18/2023 1:14:00 AM
Aw Sara, such a descriptive write ...yes, who would not long to linger more and watch the beauty of nature... isn't it? Enjoyed reading. How are you doing? So glad to read your poems after a long time... Respects and Hugs... ~ Ani
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/18/2023 3:50:00 AM
Anitha, We are all doing well at this point in our lives. Doris and her husband have colds and our son is having a flare up of his psoriasis. Life slips us a little bad along with the good things at times. Thanks for taking time to comment on this one. Sara
Date: 9/16/2023 2:20:00 PM
love the atmosphere you created here
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/17/2023 3:56:00 AM
Why, thank you, Jack. It was a nice feeling to see the creek rise come billowing up the hill. Sara
Date: 9/14/2023 2:53:00 AM
- I enjoy your beautiful lines, Sara :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/14/2023 4:52:00 AM
Thanks for the smile and nice review of my work. SK
Date: 9/13/2023 8:48:00 PM
Lovingly, wistfully, BOLDLY penned, Sara. May emotion win the wager!!
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Date: 9/14/2023 4:52:00 AM
Gershon, sometimes it does. SK
Date: 9/13/2023 7:08:00 PM
Great rhyming and view.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/14/2023 4:52:00 AM
Glad you liked it. SK
Date: 9/13/2023 6:41:00 PM
So many delicate lines of utter beauty, exquisite in content dear Sara :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/14/2023 4:51:00 AM
Why, thank you, Rose. Thanks for the visit. SK
Date: 9/13/2023 8:35:00 AM
Such is the beauty of nature that lures us to linger--wonderfully descriptive poem, Sara. A lovely write.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/13/2023 11:06:00 AM
Vijay, Thank you. I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment. Sara
Date: 9/13/2023 7:50:00 AM
"The foggy mist rose swiftly from the creek", "As the creamy plumes were wet beneath" Your imagery is ever so spellbinding dear beautiful Sara. I'm in mesmeric awe everytime I read your poems hued with resplendence.. This one evokes so many emotions.. Of a longing to be lost in the zephyr of nature and devour its essence but only if life permits us... So beautiful as always :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/13/2023 8:25:00 AM
Why, Hiya, the high praise is so uplifting. Your visits add a special touch to my page. Sara
Date: 9/13/2023 5:33:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Sara! We long to linger and absorb the energy of the moment before us! God bless!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/13/2023 8:24:00 AM
Kim, Oh, they are so short and fleeting. Thanks for the nice review. Sara
Date: 9/13/2023 5:18:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/13/2023 8:24:00 AM
Why, thank you, Jeanette. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara

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