Longing For You

Your hazel eyes ask how long I have waited and longed for you Ask the raven, how many times I asked to borrow his wings How many times I have longed to fly to you, beyond the sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kendrick Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 9:27 AM
Nice one. I enjoyed it. very expressive and emotive. I can feel the pain within the lines. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
Mo Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 11:43 PM
Thanks. I struggle with this form though
Neumann Avatar
March 30, 2020 at 12:58 PM
Wow.
White Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 10:08 PM
I love this Mr Mo. exquisite kelli
Krutsinger Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 3:32 AM
A pretty sijo, having hazel eyes myself, maybe this is what drew me in, but the beautiful imagination that pops out of this poem delighted me. Well done Marugu.
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