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Longing For You

Your hazel eyes ask how long I have waited and longed for you Ask the raven, how many times I asked to borrow his wings How many times I have longed to fly to you, beyond the sky

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2024 9:27:00 AM

Nice one. I enjoyed it. very expressive and emotive. I can feel the pain within the lines. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Marugu Mo
Date: 9/11/2024 11:43:00 PM

Thanks. I struggle with this form though

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/30/2020 12:58:00 PM

Wow.

Kelli White

Date: 9/25/2019 10:08:00 PM

I love this Mr Mo. exquisite kelli

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/27/2019 3:32:00 AM

A pretty sijo, having hazel eyes myself, maybe this is what drew me in, but the beautiful imagination that pops out of this poem delighted me. Well done Marugu.