Get Your Premium Membership

Longing For Success

I beckon to success I roam under this perpetual failure When will I reach your shore? Am I success sure? I cry in excess For my vain lure. I pray for the true pour How do I scale through? This blur mine to clear Every effort is a vapour The elders' words are true To success is a fear. Hear my heart's rhythm My faith last strength How hard I have tried? Please read me… Faint is my health Label my failure dried. Crown me, an excellent radiance A reason to style a dance...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/8/2013 9:04:00 PM
nice win Goodness........ enjoyed :) LOVE ~SKAT~
Login to Reply
Date: 10/6/2013 6:01:00 PM
Goodness CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting the ""LONGING poem"" contest <----- Awesome!! If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "FORBIDDEN". Enjoy my latest blog! "ALL SHE WROTE" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15995&PoetID=18720 -------take care & enjoy your coming week. Love*** Linda
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs