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Longing

AS I DREAM ABOUT YOU EACH DAY I CAN SEE MY LIFE SLOWLY SLIP AWAY . YOU MEAN EVERYTHING TO ME BUT YOU SAY IT CANNOT BE .THROW A SMILE MY WAY AND MY HEART IS HAPPY INSIDE DO I ALWAYS HAVE TO HIDE THE FEELINGS I HAVE FOR YOU LOCKED DEEP DOWN IN SIDE , GUESS YOUR JUST A FREE LANCE LOVER JUST A FREE LANCE LOVER DO WHAT YOU WANNA DO BE WHAT YOU WANNA BE AND LOVE WHO YOU WANNA LOVE . 3rd march 2019 title longing written by Richard ellison

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Jack Ellison

Date: 4/18/2019 9:25:00 AM

I really like this one and not because we have the same last name! LOL Cheers, Jack!

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 4/9/2019 7:06:00 PM

Been there once or twice myself

Phil Capitano

Date: 3/29/2019 7:09:00 AM

You have a very lyrical sound in this poem nicely decorated with emotional content. For read-ability, you might want to separate each line. Keep up the good work.

Richard Ellison
Date: 3/29/2019 1:03:00 PM

thank you for your opinion it is nice to have a reply once again thank you .[ Richard ]