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Longer Days

People love the longer days For soaking up those sunshine rays But I, for one, prefer the phase Of darkened afternoons. Since when the sun is all ablaze, The time one spends indoors betrays The natural urge to fresh-air graze Near flowers and balloons. Of course, the spring deserves its praise, With gardens flaunting their displays And I’ll conform to normal ways Of Aprils, Mays and Junes. But really, I like best to laze Inside when tiredness outweighs The late-day sun; my eyes just glaze (Though most would say too soon).

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Date: 3/18/2023 4:18:00 PM
Four quatrains, aaab, aaab, aaab, aaab. And pleasant to the ear and a picture of enjoyment of Spring, with a personal complication at the ending....very smoothly and quite impressively wrought, Ilene. I like it a lot.
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Date: 3/18/2023 2:46:00 PM
I like the longer days. I can take a nap anytime (no grandkids ) Thanks Ilene for the smile.
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Date: 3/18/2023 2:15:00 PM
- I look forward to longer and brighter days, Ilene - Winter is heavy and dark... - A great poem :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 3/18/2023 2:09:00 PM
Love the rhyme scheme, Ilene. When I was younger I enjoyed the "longer days", but now that I have fewer things to do and more time to do them...not so much.
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