Cory Brosius Poet I do not know?

Longbeach

we were laughing on the street.The cars kept coming and quite conversations passed us 
by.The diners were all closing and the bars were just setting up.They gave us a dirty 
look but i didnt know because i was content.My thoughts were with you.And in the dusk 
and cool nauatical breeze,i breathed you in.Life.Disaster.Hope and 
hopelesness.

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akira artly September 26, 2026 at 10:37 AM I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly

Poet Destroyer A April 8, 2016 at 3:11 AM Cory Brosius, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~

Skat A August 23, 2015 at 11:57 PM :) SKAT

Skat A July 4, 2015 at 12:15 AM I like the ending of this poem, Cory, stumbled across this poem. Thanks for sharing. Have yourself a safe and Happy 4th of July.... Love SKAT