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Longbeach

we were laughing on the street.The cars kept coming and quite conversations passed us by.The diners were all closing and the bars were just setting up.They gave us a dirty look but i didnt know because i was content.My thoughts were with you.And in the dusk and cool nauatical breeze,i breathed you in.Life.Disaster.Hope and hopelesness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 4/8/2016 3:11:00 AM
Cory Brosius, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/23/2015 11:57:00 PM
:) SKAT
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Date: 7/4/2015 12:15:00 AM
I like the ending of this poem, Cory, stumbled across this poem. Thanks for sharing. Have yourself a safe and Happy 4th of July.... Love SKAT
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