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splatter into dust tiny circles crater out graceful element 21-8-2018

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Date: 8/21/2018 5:36:00 AM
Perhaps those little puffs of dust that crater around those first ice cold raindrops that usher in a thunderstorm. Nicely done Virginia
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Virginia Waters
Date: 8/21/2018 5:07:00 PM
thank you sir - indeed. the image works!!
Date: 8/21/2018 2:40:00 AM
For some reason I see a pretty circle after a drop of rain water falls into a puddle.
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Date: 8/21/2018 5:08:00 PM
Mmm , that too. Glad it triggers images

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