Long Wait

splatter into dust

                        tiny circles crater out

                           graceful element



21-8-2018
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Lawless Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 5:36 AM
Perhaps those little puffs of dust that crater around those first ice cold raindrops that usher in a thunderstorm. Nicely done Virginia
Waters Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 5:07 PM
thank you sir - indeed. the image works!!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 2:40 AM
For some reason I see a pretty circle after a drop of rain water falls into a puddle.
Waters Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 5:08 PM
Mmm , that too. Glad it triggers images
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