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Long To Be

For often through the way I feel An idea to try and win your heart, Unspoken action this the deal Of simple mind no a la carte. Because life I know soon to fade Token symbol of you and me, Somewhere to muse, feel love in shade Of our moments together free. Oh I know I could never be Yet try I must stand in your life, Sturdy foundations yet still free Throughout all kinds of weather, rife. Powerful touch of kindly prune Such dignity with bloom the key, When snipped away to nature's tune Oh how I long to be your tree. © Harry J Horsman & Mandy M Tams 2013

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Date: 10/3/2013 1:42:00 PM
Team work has won a with this great work..Enjoyed reading this winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/3/2013 11:09:00 AM
Harry, wonderful team work........ lovely win............SKAT
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Date: 10/2/2013 12:48:00 AM
hi there congratulations on your placement harry it was a pleasure as always collaborating with you xx
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Date: 10/2/2013 3:22:00 AM
this is collab Mandy with you i do not understand how this was judged, maybe we did not follow the rules, because how would shadow know, who wrote what...
Date: 10/1/2013 7:21:00 PM
Way to go Harry and Mandy, congratulation.
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Date: 10/1/2013 3:46:00 PM
congrats on 3rd in team work contest Ty for entering Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/13/2013 11:45:00 AM
Wonder writes you guys! You compliment each other beautifully. Hugs
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Date: 9/7/2013 9:33:00 PM
This is just beautiful. You both did a beautiful job. I really enjoyed reading this eveving. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla
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Date: 9/7/2013 8:06:00 PM
Awesome job, you two. My oh my. I need to find me a partner like you found with Mandy!! I know you guys will score high with this one!! luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/6/2013 9:00:00 AM
Excellent comparison of love with fruits and tree with heart. Well done with golden pen. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/6/2013 2:47:00 AM
Thanks harry you always inspire me to come up with something it is always a pleasure doing a collab with you xx
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Date: 9/5/2013 9:48:00 PM
Nice experiment, something different
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Date: 9/5/2013 8:19:00 AM
Wow..You wowed me all way through..Harry and Mandy.Going to my fvs
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