Long To Be

For often through the way I feel
An idea to try and win your heart,
Unspoken action this the deal
Of simple mind no a la carte.

Because life I know soon to fade
Token symbol of you and me,
Somewhere to muse, feel love in shade
Of our moments together free.

Oh I know I could never be
Yet try I must stand in your life,
Sturdy foundations yet still free
Throughout all kinds of weather, rife.

Powerful touch of kindly prune
Such dignity with bloom the key,
When snipped away to nature's tune
Oh how I long to be your tree.

© Harry J Horsman  & Mandy M Tams 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 1:42 PM
Team work has won a with this great work..Enjoyed reading this winner..Congrats..Sara
A  Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 11:09 AM
Harry, wonderful team work........ lovely win............SKAT
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 12:48 AM
hi there congratulations on your placement harry it was a pleasure as always collaborating with you xx
Horsman Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 3:22 AM
this is collab Mandy with you i do not understand how this was judged, maybe we did not follow the rules, because how would shadow know, who wrote what...
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 7:21 PM
Way to go Harry and Mandy, congratulation.
Hamilton Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 3:46 PM
congrats on 3rd in team work contest Ty for entering Shadow x smile
Macfarlane Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 11:45 AM
Wonder writes you guys! You compliment each other beautifully. Hugs
Carrillo Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 9:33 PM
This is just beautiful. You both did a beautiful job. I really enjoyed reading this eveving. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 8:06 PM
Awesome job, you two. My oh my. I need to find me a partner like you found with Mandy!! I know you guys will score high with this one!! luv, Andrea
Devnath  Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 9:00 AM
Excellent comparison of love with fruits and tree with heart. Well done with golden pen. Loved always, bl
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 2:47 AM
Thanks harry you always inspire me to come up with something it is always a pleasure doing a collab with you xx
Mehta Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 9:48 PM
Nice experiment, something different
Chircop Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 8:19 AM
Wow..You wowed me all way through..Harry and Mandy.Going to my fvs
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