Long Shadows

Trees in silhouette
Basking in the evening glow
Daylight slips away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chu Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 11:09 AM
Nice haiku
Walsh Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 10:37 AM
I really like this Haiku - the imagery is wonderful! Liz
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September 9, 2010 at 9:08 AM
The image of the night creeping up, is a very intresting view as the sun starts to slip away itself. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
Roberts Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 8:55 AM
lovely imagery
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September 9, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Have you ever noticed how quickly the long shadows grow as days get shorter, Deb. Your lovely haiku reflects thoughts that have been on my mind lately. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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