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Long Shadows

Trees in silhouette Basking in the evening glow Daylight slips away

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Hyle Chu

Date: 9/9/2010 11:09:00 AM

Nice haiku

Liz Walsh

Date: 9/9/2010 10:37:00 AM

I really like this Haiku - the imagery is wonderful! Liz

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/9/2010 9:08:00 AM

The image of the night creeping up, is a very intresting view as the sun starts to slip away itself. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/9/2010 8:55:00 AM

lovely imagery

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/9/2010 8:42:00 AM

Have you ever noticed how quickly the long shadows grow as days get shorter, Deb. Your lovely haiku reflects thoughts that have been on my mind lately. Very nice! Love, Carolyn