long retail lines sting

long retail lines sting
impatience brews within them
anger serves no one
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Sands Avatar
March 4, 2026 at 7:10 AM
True! That is how it can be :)
Wolf Avatar
February 28, 2026 at 8:58 PM
Kind of like road rage, it seems to me. ... At a certain point, if the line stagnates too long, the anger boils over.
Terry Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 11:22 AM
I've never dealt with road rage, but I work in retail, and I've seen retail rage. It's not pretty. Thanks for the review.
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