Long Night

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with light of dawn, a child's fever breaks, and a mother breathes
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Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:46 PM
wonderful ending on this one. Congrats for the win.
Onclaud Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 1:11 PM
so beautuful, carrie.. sweet congrats on your award!..huggs
Milliner Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 5:04 PM
I understand this very well! Congratulations!!
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February 9, 2016 at 3:54 PM
hashtag ##motherwait #reassurance
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February 9, 2016 at 3:47 PM
Hello, Carrie, Congratulations on your top rocking win. Stop by my latest blog "How Shocking" if YA like... AN honor to have you support my contest. ~LINDA~
Gentry Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Callus Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 3:27 PM
This is truly inspired, Carrie! Congratulations! ~ Regards // paul
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November 26, 2013 at 12:03 PM
you knew which buttons to push. congrads
Bantawa Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 7:29 AM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN!
Arowolo Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 9:57 AM
Lovely piece,Carrie...Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...
Guzzi Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 8:48 AM
his fever/breaks at dawn-mother smiles :) monoku is simply haiku written 1 line instead of three Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 2:21 AM
Just wonderful, Carrie. Congrats for your win.
Mehta Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 7:31 PM
Congratulations on the fine win,Carrie
Adams Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 4:59 PM
oh yes...have been there many times with the children....good one...congrats on your win :)
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November 23, 2013 at 1:25 PM
- Carrie, congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: Hope! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 22, 2013 at 10:13 AM
great mom! really its great for a lovely mom.Who's that gifted son? (: ) New Santa.
Situation Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 8:00 PM
a heart wrenching entry.
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 4:40 PM
LOVE IT
Hamilton Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 4:38 PM
the passion of a parent pours out Carrie excellent pen Shadow x smile hug
Tacito Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 3:57 PM
I know this dealing w/my nieces. I definitely understand this. Nicely expressed!
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November 18, 2013 at 3:22 PM
† One Can Imagine The Relief In His Mommy's Heart But Better Still, Her Awareness As Vigilence Towards Most Any Preditory Virus Or Not, Which May There After Arrive Slash, Arise ? Very Touching In Beautiful, Sweet Beautiful Carrie ˜ Happy Holidays To You, As Always ˜ Love John
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