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Long Lost Friend

Long Lost Friend

For the first time in forever
he took a long look in the mirror.
Suddenly his reflection
began to come much clearer.

The wrinkles on his face and hands
around his eyes and brow.
Reminders of the yesterdays
that he survived somehow.

Laugh lines etched into his skin
from good times that he knew.
Lines of worry ran so deep
he thought he'd never make it through.

Scars from battles he had fought.
One reminder of a fall.
A grateful tear fell from his eye
he had survived it all.

He saw the times that he had grieved
and other tears he cried.
When somewhere love had reached an end
or a loved one that had died.

Somehow looking there he saw
a heart still on the mend.
As he looked into the mirror
and found his long lost friend.

Edwin C Hofert
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May 21, 2015 at 4:48 PM
This is a well written poem. A beautiful story of a man fidinding himself. I think we all should take a look in the mirror! I'm glad I had the chance to stop by and read this 7 piece. -Alexis
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May 21, 2015 at 5:25 PM
Thank you Alexis. I could not agree more. God bless! Ed
Konos Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 12:29 PM
You did it again, huh? You think you're smart huh?. . . . huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huhhuh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh
Hofert Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 12:44 PM
LOL Did what again? Silly woman LOL
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 9:51 AM
Sometimes we look in the mirror and do not see what others see in us as we are so self critical Edwin - love the positivity in the write:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 9:55 AM
Soup was on and off recently Edwin - more off than on so comments and reads are down recently:-( Hugs Jan xx
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May 21, 2015 at 9:54 AM
Thank you Jan!!! Missed you! Hope all is well. There was a couple days I didn't receive any notifications and so I'm going in to see what I've missed! God bless!
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