"long Kiss"

Taking my lady
and running to the beach,
where we are one.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 31, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Nice take here Michal.Rgds Brian
Mehta Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 7:35 PM
Nice way to express passion and love
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May 16, 2010 at 7:33 AM
You have me smiling with this one. Sounds like love. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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