Long Distance

folding time and space
      origami of the heart
    
     love and paper  cuts
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Kauffman Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 11:28 PM
Such a vivid picture in your senryu! Congratulations.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 7:26 AM
Thank you Sam! :) xomo
Shaw Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 3:55 AM
You never fail Mo, to come up with the best, a brilliant; cut to the heart Senryu . . . : )
Knapp Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 1:08 AM
Love and paper cuts is a fantastic thought put together. The heart is the center. Very creative. Love it.
Hopper Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 10:13 AM
“Love and paper cuts”. I love it!
Leffanta Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 7:50 PM
Long distance or First Blood? Aloha! Rico
Mcguire Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 5:16 PM
Well written, it is curious what origami figure would be created depending on the condition of that heart. More love or more paper cuts!
Connelly Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 3:48 PM
As always Maureen: Brilliant!!! The perfect words to make the perfect poem.
Allison Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 2:31 PM
sharp ink indeed Mo!:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 12:36 PM
Love the play on words, ma'am! Cuts both ways! :) gw
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