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Long Distance

folding time and space origami of the heart love and paper cuts

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Date: 2/10/2020 11:28:00 PM

Such a vivid picture in your senryu! Congratulations.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/11/2020 7:26:00 AM

Thank you Sam! :) xomo

Date: 1/19/2020 3:55:00 AM

You never fail Mo, to come up with the best, a brilliant; cut to the heart Senryu . . . : )

Date: 1/15/2020 1:08:00 AM

Love and paper cuts is a fantastic thought put together. The heart is the center. Very creative. Love it.

Date: 1/14/2020 10:13:00 AM

“Love and paper cuts”. I love it!

Date: 1/10/2020 7:50:00 PM

Long distance or First Blood? Aloha! Rico

Date: 1/10/2020 5:16:00 PM

Well written, it is curious what origami figure would be created depending on the condition of that heart. More love or more paper cuts!

Date: 1/10/2020 3:48:00 PM

As always Maureen: Brilliant!!! The perfect words to make the perfect poem.

Date: 1/10/2020 2:31:00 PM

sharp ink indeed Mo!:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 1/10/2020 12:36:00 PM

Love the play on words, ma'am! Cuts both ways! :) gw