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Long Ago

Oh, I remember
Cards on spikes
On the bikes we rode

Heidi Sands

10/2/18

Placed 2nd in the bikers dozen contest. 
Syllables: 5/3/5

Copyright © Heidi Sands | Year Posted 2018

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October 15, 2018 at 1:05 PM

This reminds me of being a kid again, like drinking out of a garden hose. Sometimes I sneak a sip just to taste my childhood. Thanks for the walk down memory lane.

October 15, 2018 at 1:13 PM

Hi Wren. Thank you for your comment and that is a sweet memory of yours. :)

October 9, 2018 at 10:30 AM

You captured an iconic memory so well. Congrats on your win in the contest, Heidi! Best wishes, Gershon

October 9, 2018 at 10:36 AM

Thank you Gershon :)

October 4, 2018 at 7:52 AM

A great memory image from the past, Heidi! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra

October 4, 2018 at 8:01 AM

Thank you Sandra. I appreciate your support :)

October 3, 2018 at 1:42 PM

I remember that like it was yesterday, but you only used the baseball cards you had doubles of. : ) Nicely done Heidi

October 3, 2018 at 2:51 PM

LOL Thank you Chris :)

October 3, 2018 at 1:41 PM

That was a lot of fun Heidi...great verse and memories my friend...love & light...^WW^

October 3, 2018 at 2:51 PM

Thank you WW. Love & Light and Bikes :) lol

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 3, 2018 at 1:12 PM

It looks like a Senryu dearest, Heidi! A great one I might say!

October 3, 2018 at 2:51 PM

Thank you Demetrios :)

October 3, 2018 at 4:46 AM

So do I...great piece; best of luck in the contest.

October 3, 2018 at 7:08 AM

That's nice. Thank you, M.L. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 3, 2018 at 3:45 AM

- Nice memories, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

October 3, 2018 at 7:08 AM

Thank you Anne - Lise :)

October 2, 2018 at 5:16 PM

Lovely image and happy memories Heidi. Tom

October 2, 2018 at 6:21 PM

Thank you Tom :)

October 2, 2018 at 4:20 PM

A fond look back..well written, Heidi. Best for a win.

October 2, 2018 at 4:21 PM

Thank you Vijay! :)

October 2, 2018 at 3:15 PM

ohh, i had a grreat time doing this too, heidi... so fluid and lively..huggs

October 2, 2018 at 3:19 PM

It was fun on the bikes back then. Thank you Nette :)

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