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Long Ago 

Oh, I remember
Cards on spikes
On the bikes we rode

Heidi Sands

10/2/18

Placed 2nd in the bikers dozen contest. 
Syllables: 5/3/5

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/15/2018 1:05:00 PM
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This reminds me of being a kid again, like drinking out of a garden hose. Sometimes I sneak a sip just to taste my childhood. Thanks for the walk down memory lane.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/15/2018 1:13:00 PM
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Hi Wren. Thank you for your comment and that is a sweet memory of yours. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/9/2018 10:30:00 AM
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You captured an iconic memory so well. Congrats on your win in the contest, Heidi! Best wishes, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/9/2018 10:36:00 AM
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Thank you Gershon :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/4/2018 7:52:00 AM
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A great memory image from the past, Heidi! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/4/2018 8:01:00 AM
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Thank you Sandra. I appreciate your support :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2018 1:42:00 PM
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I remember that like it was yesterday, but you only used the baseball cards you had doubles of. : ) Nicely done Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/3/2018 2:51:00 PM
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LOL Thank you Chris :)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 10/3/2018 1:41:00 PM
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That was a lot of fun Heidi...great verse and memories my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/3/2018 2:51:00 PM
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Thank you WW. Love & Light and Bikes :) lol
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/3/2018 1:12:00 PM
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It looks like a Senryu dearest, Heidi! A great one I might say!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/3/2018 2:51:00 PM
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Thank you Demetrios :)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/3/2018 4:46:00 AM
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So do I...great piece; best of luck in the contest.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/3/2018 7:08:00 AM
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That's nice. Thank you, M.L. :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/3/2018 3:45:00 AM
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- Nice memories, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/3/2018 7:08:00 AM
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Thank you Anne - Lise :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/2/2018 5:16:00 PM
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Lovely image and happy memories Heidi. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2018 6:21:00 PM
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Thank you Tom :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2018 4:20:00 PM
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A fond look back..well written, Heidi. Best for a win.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2018 4:21:00 PM
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Thank you Vijay! :)
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 10/2/2018 3:15:00 PM
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ohh, i had a grreat time doing this too, heidi... so fluid and lively..huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2018 3:19:00 PM
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It was fun on the bikes back then. Thank you Nette :)
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