Long Ago

Oh, I remember Cards on spikes On the bikes we rode Heidi Sands 10/2/18 Placed 2nd in the bikers dozen contest. Syllables: 5/3/5

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Wren Rushing

Date: 10/15/2018 1:05:00 PM

This reminds me of being a kid again, like drinking out of a garden hose. Sometimes I sneak a sip just to taste my childhood. Thanks for the walk down memory lane.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/15/2018 1:13:00 PM

Hi Wren. Thank you for your comment and that is a sweet memory of yours. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/9/2018 10:30:00 AM

You captured an iconic memory so well. Congrats on your win in the contest, Heidi! Best wishes, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/9/2018 10:36:00 AM

Thank you Gershon :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/4/2018 7:52:00 AM

A great memory image from the past, Heidi! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/4/2018 8:01:00 AM

Thank you Sandra. I appreciate your support :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/3/2018 1:42:00 PM

I remember that like it was yesterday, but you only used the baseball cards you had doubles of. : ) Nicely done Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/3/2018 2:51:00 PM

LOL Thank you Chris :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/3/2018 1:41:00 PM

That was a lot of fun Heidi...great verse and memories my friend...love & light...^WW^

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/3/2018 2:51:00 PM

Thank you WW. Love & Light and Bikes :) lol

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/3/2018 1:12:00 PM

It looks like a Senryu dearest, Heidi! A great one I might say!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/3/2018 2:51:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/3/2018 4:46:00 AM

So do I...great piece; best of luck in the contest.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/3/2018 7:08:00 AM

That's nice. Thank you, M.L. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/3/2018 3:45:00 AM

- Nice memories, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/3/2018 7:08:00 AM

Thank you Anne - Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/2/2018 5:16:00 PM

Lovely image and happy memories Heidi. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2018 6:21:00 PM

Thank you Tom :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/2/2018 4:20:00 PM

A fond look back..well written, Heidi. Best for a win.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2018 4:21:00 PM

Thank you Vijay! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/2/2018 3:15:00 PM

ohh, i had a grreat time doing this too, heidi... so fluid and lively..huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2018 3:19:00 PM

It was fun on the bikes back then. Thank you Nette :)