Get Your Premium Membership

Loney, Lonely Day

My falling tears taste like the rain Salty yet full of pain they fall The days seem to grow so long She no longer is in my day Will one understand that i die inside a little each passing hour Prolong the seconds will you not Search in me, and you will find emptyness I am to roam this place alone, for no matter what my hands touch it fruits not Why do i always hurt those around me Help, will you too read and leave Am I to die alone, will you too look the other way Swear you love me, and leave me? I need you, please come back, and let's make this work My tears fall dry, as i too die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/29/2010 1:44:00 PM
sad thoughts, hope you are not really sad. take care.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2010 2:32:00 AM
Very heart rendering write Edward very much enjoyed...Thank you for reading mine.....Allie
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2010 4:10:00 PM
Touching and deep ..Eddie..
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2010 4:04:00 PM
Sad love loss write...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2010 4:02:00 PM
Beautifully written and romantically touching Edward... enjoyed reading your lovely creative write tonight..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs