Lonesome Poets Brook

I was by a cozy little brook Where the lonesome poets lay As I gazed into every nook For the thoughts there on display Looking into the water My eyes began to see a shine Wondering how many glances it took For me to see something so sublime Twas a reflection of a cloud With the sunlight shining through Sort of an angelic shroud With a beauty that was so true Sunlight shineing from its heart As it hovered over head Wishing for it never to part Slowly the clouds began to spread Though I will never forget that day By the lonesome poets brook With the beauty of the angel on display Being the only one given a look
Danny Boy:2-14-13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/2/2014 11:04:00 PM
very good rhythm
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Date: 9/6/2013 3:32:00 PM
Just beautiful! Your words flow very nicely with your rhymes. I loved the rhyme scheme you used. I write most of my rhyming poems in the same way. It seems to be a rare writing style. Very well done, Dan!....Thank you for the kind comments on my poem. It means a lot!
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Date: 3/29/2013 4:52:00 AM
An artist at work, in the quietness of the moment and the beauty of his surrounds, very relaxing, peaceful and special. Thankyou for sharing your words. - Shaz xo
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Date: 2/20/2013 10:08:00 PM
Another beautiful, touching one Dan. So glad I decided to read this one! Always, Laura
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Date: 2/19/2013 8:13:00 PM
beautiful write Danny Boy! You paint such a peaceful, elegant picture here. love it! And thanks so much for the comments... you make me smile :)
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Date: 2/16/2013 2:41:00 PM
aaww... I possess no words of adequate elegance to describe the awesomesauceness of such a poem so I will simply say: FAVE yeep! always, Becca
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Date: 2/15/2013 7:32:00 AM
just beautiful and transmitting serenity..danny boy
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Date: 2/15/2013 3:10:00 AM
It is your angel looking after you, everyone has an angel. - Beautiful poem my f.e.f. - Have a lovely weekend! - oxox / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)
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