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Lonesome At the Sea

Lonesome at the Sea Thundering waves, sky high, Spray like drunken pearls, blended rainbow colours, breaking through clouds. Veils of the night, still sleepy in early morning's light fade timidly in banks of clouds. Driftwood, days like driftwood submerge in currents, arise anew. The water's colour disperses heavenwards A single whitish sail plays hide and seek behind some crests of waves. Silent hours lost at an empty beach.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/8/2009 6:03:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. Very nicely penned. I can almost feel myself sitting on a beach watching the bobbing of the sails at the horizon.
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Date: 8/8/2009 12:32:00 PM
This imagery actually speaks! Good job!- eddie
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Date: 8/6/2009 4:08:00 AM
Refreshing words for this morning. Sara
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Date: 8/5/2009 7:27:00 AM
Oh, Gert, you take us there! This is a wonderfully descriptive poem - well done, and thank you!
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Date: 8/5/2009 4:10:00 AM
Good morning Gert. I enjoyed reading your awesome poem this morning. Thank you. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2009 8:57:00 PM
Hi Gert, you have shown me a very high level of talent here! my friend!...jimbo
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Date: 8/4/2009 8:03:00 PM
Well Gret thinks for your words on one of my poems I may one day write a novel but it would be under a different name. I have many enemies out there in the world but a lot of friends two. One a different point Very nice poem i feel like i am on the ocen when i read it! Your Friend Jefferson
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