Lonely Together

You're radiant in my eyes
Blue skies 
Have nothing on you 
You're feeling lonely
I am too
We could be feeling lonely together
In this gloomy weather
Fall asleep in bed 
Listening to music together wishing we were dead
And face each other and smile 
At least we have each other for a while 
It's the only happiness I can feel
But that's okay, it's a friendship sealed 
Everything else just makes me feel ill
Your presence makes me feel healed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 26, 2016 at 8:26 PM
guadalupe, Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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July 16, 2014 at 7:45 PM
intriguing write. The line "We could be feeling lonely together" anchors this poem in a depth of loneliness the slows the heart.
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