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Lonely Together

You're radiant in my eyes Blue skies Have nothing on you You're feeling lonely I am too We could be feeling lonely together In this gloomy weather Fall asleep in bed Listening to music together wishing we were dead And face each other and smile At least we have each other for a while It's the only happiness I can feel But that's okay, it's a friendship sealed Everything else just makes me feel ill Your presence makes me feel healed

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Date: 5/26/2016 8:26:00 PM
guadalupe, Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 7/16/2014 7:45:00 PM
intriguing write. The line "We could be feeling lonely together" anchors this poem in a depth of loneliness the slows the heart.
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