Lonely Tear Drops

I twelve brother ten
  lonely tear drops hot closet
             dad gone mother alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 30, 2010 at 8:34 AM
i like this one, deep write, enjoyed,..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 11:33 AM
lovely haiku with good images and very emotionalsd on tear drops, Tommy
Paige Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 7:03 PM
Tommy! Knew you'd be here! This had too take you back.....I remember the Convo! Cpaige6.
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December 19, 2010 at 6:17 PM
Full of depth and emotion Tommy.. interesting intro line .. enjoyed with luv tonight ...
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