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Lonely Sunrise, Lonely Me

~ alone amidst the darkness my heart collects the weight facing towards an eastern point a rusted iron gate staring at the tree line its distant silhouette a glow forms the horizon illumines my regret longing your affection wishing silently to a lonely sunrise from a lonely me ~

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Date: 9/4/2019 7:22:00 PM
This flows so nicely. Well written Chris! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Heidi for everything
Date: 9/2/2019 9:07:00 AM
from a lonely me...I sure understand that one. Excellent write my friend. Penned, sharply with expert precision. Ann
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Chris Green
Date: 9/2/2019 9:22:00 AM
Thank you so very much Ann.
Date: 8/30/2019 2:44:00 PM
So beautifully sad...
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Chris Green
Date: 8/30/2019 2:50:00 PM
Thank you so much. I am happy you liked this little sad morning poem.
Date: 8/30/2019 11:22:00 AM
WoW! Chris, You painted a picture of loneliness that was so relatable. Good content and imagery. It's so good to see you posting again:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 8/30/2019 12:26:00 PM
Thanks so very much Alexis. I appreciate it. It is good to be back. :)
Date: 8/30/2019 10:31:00 AM
Beautifully expressed.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/30/2019 10:51:00 AM
Thank you Richard for your kindness.
Date: 8/30/2019 10:22:00 AM
Such perfect imagery as always from you Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/30/2019 10:50:00 AM
Thank you Elizabeth. That is such a nice thing to say
Date: 8/30/2019 10:06:00 AM
even in the poignancy there is much beauty here...i could see the iron gate and the sunrise...great flow and rhyme! :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 8/30/2019 10:50:00 AM
Thank you Sandy so very much. Some mornings are just like this

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