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Lonely Sunrise, Lonely Me

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alone amidst the darkness
my heart collects the weight
facing towards an eastern point
a rusted iron gate

staring at the tree line
its distant silhouette 
a glow forms the horizon
illumines my regret

longing your affection
wishing silently
to a lonely sunrise
from a lonely me

~

Copyright © Chris Green | Year Posted 2019

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Heidi Sands Date: 9/4/2019 7:22:00 PM This flows so nicely. Well written Chris! :) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 9/5/2019 6:55:00 AM Thank you Heidi for everything

Ann Foster Date: 9/2/2019 9:07:00 AM from a lonely me...I sure understand that one. Excellent write my friend. Penned, sharply with expert precision. Ann Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 9/2/2019 9:22:00 AM Thank you so very much Ann.

Hello There Date: 8/30/2019 2:44:00 PM So beautifully sad... Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 8/30/2019 2:50:00 PM Thank you so much. I am happy you liked this little sad morning poem.

Alexis Y. Date: 8/30/2019 11:22:00 AM WoW! Chris, You painted a picture of loneliness that was so relatable. Good content and imagery. It's so good to see you posting again:-) Alexis Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 8/30/2019 12:26:00 PM Thanks so very much Alexis. I appreciate it. It is good to be back. :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/30/2019 10:31:00 AM Beautifully expressed. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 8/30/2019 10:51:00 AM Thank you Richard for your kindness.

Elizabeth Kinch Date: 8/30/2019 10:22:00 AM Such perfect imagery as always from you Chris. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 8/30/2019 10:50:00 AM Thank you Elizabeth. That is such a nice thing to say

Sandra Adams Date: 8/30/2019 10:06:00 AM even in the poignancy there is much beauty here...i could see the iron gate and the sunrise...great flow and rhyme! :) hugs Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 8/30/2019 10:50:00 AM Thank you Sandy so very much. Some mornings are just like this