Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Lonely Sunrise, Lonely Me

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alone amidst the darkness
my heart collects the weight
facing towards an eastern point
a rusted iron gate

staring at the tree line
its distant silhouette 
a glow forms the horizon
illumines my regret

longing your affection
wishing silently
to a lonely sunrise
from a lonely me

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Heidi Sands September 4, 2019 at 7:22 PM This flows so nicely. Well written Chris! :) Chris Green September 5, 2019 at 6:55 AM Thank you Heidi for everything

Ann Foster September 2, 2019 at 9:07 AM from a lonely me...I sure understand that one. Excellent write my friend. Penned, sharply with expert precision. Ann Chris Green September 2, 2019 at 9:22 AM Thank you so very much Ann.

Hello There August 30, 2019 at 2:44 PM So beautifully sad... Chris Green August 30, 2019 at 2:50 PM Thank you so much. I am happy you liked this little sad morning poem.

Alexis Y. August 30, 2019 at 11:22 AM WoW! Chris, You painted a picture of loneliness that was so relatable. Good content and imagery. It's so good to see you posting again:-) Alexis Chris Green August 30, 2019 at 12:26 PM Thanks so very much Alexis. I appreciate it. It is good to be back. :)

Richard Lamoureux August 30, 2019 at 10:31 AM Beautifully expressed. Chris Green August 30, 2019 at 10:51 AM Thank you Richard for your kindness.

Elizabeth Kinch August 30, 2019 at 10:22 AM Such perfect imagery as always from you Chris. Chris Green August 30, 2019 at 10:50 AM Thank you Elizabeth. That is such a nice thing to say

Sandra Adams August 30, 2019 at 10:06 AM even in the poignancy there is much beauty here...i could see the iron gate and the sunrise...great flow and rhyme! :) hugs Chris Green August 30, 2019 at 10:50 AM Thank you Sandy so very much. Some mornings are just like this