Lonely People

altruistic monsoon
sublimed drumming
on the chest of the
thatched roof
she is undressing
my dissociated conscience
delicate fingers dance
preparing to make love
with my creative mind
my thoughts my voice
shadow of my existence
arent we all
lonely 
here
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Great poem Francis. Love the enjambment. Especially the lines "she is undressing my dissociated conscience."
Osho Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 9:23 AM
ty tim
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