Bl Devnath Poet Dizain

Lonely Night's Insanity Evermore

a part of my heart no longer with me 
                          days past gone now sun is setting down quite 
                                      morn petals dying in reality 
                          sweet words in passage of time getting white 
                           sonorous drum bits you loved now feel smite 
                              I love you much so perhaps is my fault 
                               in dream of life I have got Somersault 
                               I have no words to say anything more 
                              each and every second feel thunderbolt
                                   lonely night's insanity evermore  


                             Written on: 16th May 2016

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Skat A July 12, 2016 at 1:37 AM Awesome looking win, Bl.skat Bl Devnath July 12, 2016 at 12:27 PM Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Dineen Williams Gault May 23, 2016 at 10:15 AM The pain can be worse at night, less distraction, and often sleep will not come. Hard to escape such sadness. Congratulations! Bl Devnath May 23, 2016 at 10:39 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely wishes. Loved always, bl

Brian Davey May 21, 2016 at 4:47 AM Heartfelt pain and struggle laid out beautifully my friend! Congrats on your win Bl Devnath May 21, 2016 at 11:14 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Karam Misra May 21, 2016 at 1:01 AM Excellent poem, Dev. Conrats onyour win in the contest. ~karam~ Bl Devnath May 21, 2016 at 11:14 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Beautiful Scars May 20, 2016 at 1:34 PM BL, thank you for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement :)-luloo Bl Devnath May 20, 2016 at 2:08 PM Thanks a lot my lovely friend for giving my poem in placement in the contest. Ever grateful to you. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2016 at 8:49 PM You had good imagery in this one. Bored is the correct word but that would throw off the rhyme! Anyway, I think you did a good job! Bl Devnath May 15, 2016 at 11:01 PM Thank you much my lovely friend for your helping comment. Loved always, bl

Demetrios Trifiatis May 15, 2016 at 5:39 PM If insanity and boredom are the causes of such lovely writing imagine when sanity and interest come what marvels you will produce, my dearest friend, BLD! haha! Wonderful writing! A seven! Bl Devnath May 15, 2016 at 11:03 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment with 7. Loved always, bl