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Lonely Night's Insanity Evermore

a part of my heart no longer with me days past gone now sun is setting down quite morn petals dying in reality sweet words in passage of time getting white sonorous drum bits you loved now feel smite I love you much so perhaps is my fault in dream of life I have got Somersault I have no words to say anything more each and every second feel thunderbolt lonely night's insanity evermore Written on: 16th May 2016

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Skat A

Date: 7/12/2016 1:37:00 AM

Awesome looking win, Bl.skat

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/12/2016 12:27:00 PM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 5/23/2016 10:15:00 AM

The pain can be worse at night, less distraction, and often sleep will not come. Hard to escape such sadness. Congratulations!

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/23/2016 10:39:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely wishes. Loved always, bl

Brian Davey

Date: 5/21/2016 4:47:00 AM

Heartfelt pain and struggle laid out beautifully my friend! Congrats on your win

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/21/2016 11:14:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Karam Misra

Date: 5/21/2016 1:01:00 AM

Excellent poem, Dev. Conrats onyour win in the contest. ~karam~

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/21/2016 11:14:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Lu Loo

Date: 5/20/2016 1:34:00 PM

BL, thank you for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/20/2016 2:08:00 PM

Thanks a lot my lovely friend for giving my poem in placement in the contest. Ever grateful to you. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2016 8:49:00 PM

You had good imagery in this one. Bored is the correct word but that would throw off the rhyme! Anyway, I think you did a good job!

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/15/2016 11:01:00 PM

Thank you much my lovely friend for your helping comment. Loved always, bl

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/15/2016 5:39:00 PM

If insanity and boredom are the causes of such lovely writing imagine when sanity and interest come what marvels you will produce, my dearest friend, BLD! haha! Wonderful writing! A seven!

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/15/2016 11:03:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment with 7. Loved always, bl