Lonely Night

The moon hangs her mournful head
like a jilted love.
Tears rain... cacaphonic stars.

-my first attempt at a haiku! Enjoy...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 1:51 AM
Nice opening line Levi, great display of work here...Raul
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 12:29 PM
Enjoyed your Haiku. Very expressive and descriptive. Sara
Huggins Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 11:29 AM
This is really beautiful, i really like it
Al-Riyami Avatar
June 20, 2009 at 3:53 PM
Thats hott:p I like would totally would go but i go for the opposite sex-->So let him Be a Dude groanin' & I Drool
K Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 7:47 PM
Very nice Levi, a great write indeed -Jessica
Shango Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 12:20 PM
But not a virgin maker of imageries ... so powerful the thing upon the page ... it has no death. Glory!
Goff Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 5:44 PM
very creative talent you have! Levi!!! original work!!! nice!!! Jim
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