Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

Lonely, Lonely

Lonely nights, lonely days,
Lonely sights, lonely ways,
Lonely spots are here to stay,
Lonely thoughts won't go away,

Lonely feelings, what do I do,
Lonely dealings, it's getting blue,

Lonely walks, lonely tears,
Lonely shocks, lonely fears,
Lonely heart, I feel the sting,
Lonely start, my hands I wring,

Lonely dances, no one to pair,
Lonely chances, no one to care,

Lonely skies, no one's around,
Lonely sighs, I'm feeling drowned,
Lonely hugs, I feel alone,
Lonely tugs, I stand and groan,

Lonely, lonely, lonely I feel,
Lonely, lonely, right now my deal.



03/13/19

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Joseph May March 18, 2019 at 6:40 PM Very nice flow to this pensive write..Best wishes

Andrea Dietrich March 17, 2019 at 7:22 PM wow, a lot of lonely here. I love how lyrical it is. WELL done.

Vijay Pandit March 17, 2019 at 3:37 PM In its melancholy theme, your poem flows beautifully, Jo...those feelings are endured by many..and many can relate to.

Carolyn Devonshire March 17, 2019 at 2:51 PM I can certainly relate to the feelings expressed here, Jo. Been living alone for a long time and it often feels like life is passing by. Really like the tempo and use of rhyme and repetition. Well done!