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Lonely, Lonely

Lonely nights, lonely days, Lonely sights, lonely ways, Lonely spots are here to stay, Lonely thoughts won't go away, Lonely feelings, what do I do, Lonely dealings, it's getting blue, Lonely walks, lonely tears, Lonely shocks, lonely fears, Lonely heart, I feel the sting, Lonely start, my hands I wring, Lonely dances, no one to pair, Lonely chances, no one to care, Lonely skies, no one's around, Lonely sighs, I'm feeling drowned, Lonely hugs, I feel alone, Lonely tugs, I stand and groan, Lonely, lonely, lonely I feel, Lonely, lonely, right now my deal. 03/13/19

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Date: 3/18/2019 6:40:00 PM
Very nice flow to this pensive write..Best wishes
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Date: 3/17/2019 7:22:00 PM
wow, a lot of lonely here. I love how lyrical it is. WELL done.
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Date: 3/17/2019 3:37:00 PM
In its melancholy theme, your poem flows beautifully, Jo...those feelings are endured by many..and many can relate to.
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Date: 3/17/2019 2:51:00 PM
I can certainly relate to the feelings expressed here, Jo. Been living alone for a long time and it often feels like life is passing by. Really like the tempo and use of rhyme and repetition. Well done!
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