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Contest: Titanic Farewell
Darkness falls on the doomed ship’s dazzling frame, Pride and joy of Maiden Voyage destroyed, The wreck descends into a frigid void Sinking souls to their deaths of frothy fame. Like you that’s what I read ‘bout frantic sight, I learned I was the young whom fate would spare, No memories of my parents’ despair - Fortunate star shone on me that chill night. But if Titanic dragged me down as well What would my last words to my loved ones be?! « Let the buried past rest in peace at sea as dead forever mourned - you live to tell».
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