Angela Alldredge Poet Rhyme

Lonely Hearts

God called a loving mother home,
leaving a husband and two children on this earth to roam.
One day the father meet another,
which was also a mother!
There was love and peace,
but it was soon to cist.
For father ask another to be his wife,
changing everybody's feelings and way of life.
The bitterness and lies
caused hurt under watchful eyes.
Never any trust caused the love to turn to hate.
Now it's destoryed, no mater how you wipe the slate.
Unable to become a united seminally,
shows we will never be a true family.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire August 10, 2012 at 8:53 PM Dear Angela, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS, Healthy and High in the Spirit. I am reading You from Your Beginning. A very Powerful POEM the reader enters YOUR Mind " The bitterness and lies" " caused hurt under " watchful eyes"" "Never any trust caused the love to turn to hate" Marvelous Lines, "shows we will never be a "true family."" You intrigue me, with a Heart of Sorrow with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Eternal Liege...HG

Poet Destroyer A September 18, 2010 at 5:51 PM Hello, Angela here I am stopping by to say hi and CONGRATULATIONS! What a delightful poem. Had fun reading your featured poem of the week. Take care,.. p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown September 13, 2010 at 12:33 PM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Angela. Love, Carol

K K Iloduba Jnr February 17, 2010 at 12:55 PM the future is always ahead,and brighter.it does not matter what u ve lost.take kia angie!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire February 17, 2010 at 7:42 AM Dear Angela, A Beautiful Write Befitting the Title I can relate to this Masterpiece of POETRY I have Found a new LOVE on this site and my Feelings are in a knot I still LOVE my Wife God REST Her Soul A very warm Welcome TO the SOUP Family The Freshness in YOUR POETRY is Welcomed Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my POEM " YOU ARE " I hope to read THIS feeling in all YOUR POETRY ALWAYS YOURS...HG

Susan Palli February 14, 2010 at 11:41 AM so sad and so sorry

Skat A February 14, 2010 at 11:08 AM WOW THAT IS A DIFFRENT WAY TO PUT IT ..YOUR NOT READY TO MOVE ON..DON'T BLAME YOU I MY SELF DON'T TRUST NO ONE..I'M SORRY I CAN VISUALIZE THE WHOLE EVENT HAPPENING. ENJOYED THE POEM.....IRMA