Lonely Death

Her breaths begins to shallow,
Her lips a shade of blue,
Her eyes nearly closing,
Her time on earth is through.

Her pain is finally over,
Her minds begins to clear,
Her soul is calm and peaceful, 
Her memories disappear.

She has a little smile,
As she takes her final breathe,
Her heart has just stop beating, 
Her silent lonely death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gauthier Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 11:25 AM
Beautiful, Alissa ~ poignant
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August 24, 2020 at 4:19 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Alissa ... I remember how exciting it was to post my first poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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August 24, 2020 at 2:43 AM
I remember this one, a very sad first post and glad you are ok.. This was not really a contest, it was an opportunity to showcase your first poem and I am glad you entered. Thank you.
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March 8, 2020 at 6:51 AM
This is very sad.. I hope you are ok.
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