Lonely

A telephone that seldom rings So many songs I never sing I open the door, but no ones there Where are all the people who say they care The world outside keeps going by As I look out the window and try not to cry Where did all the people go? The ones I love, I miss them so Long days turn into night It's oh so lonely till early morning light If I could only be what I used to be I know how proud you'd be of me But only then do I realize The lord is very very close by Then as I wipe away a tear from my eye I hear him say, my child do not cry And then I'm happy like I used to be Because I know he's here for me

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Francine Roberts

Date: 8/29/2012 5:40:00 PM

really great piece you've penned here, congrats on having it featured this week

Veronica Aicher
Date: 8/30/2012 9:01:00 PM

Thank you so much Francine. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her everyday when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It give her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.

Angelica Grier

Date: 8/29/2012 12:39:00 PM

I know this feeling all too well. Great way to express yourself.

Veronica Aicher
Date: 8/30/2012 9:02:00 PM

Thank you Angelica. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 8/29/2012 7:59:00 AM

Bravo Veronica, Congrats on having your great poem being featured on the PoetrySoup Homepage this week, keep tapping from the incredible ink flowing from your honoured heart. Wishing you many more features in the future. Love, Adeleke

Veronica Aicher
Date: 8/30/2012 9:03:00 PM

Thanks Adeleke. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.

Victor Chavez

Date: 8/29/2012 2:26:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful. That's exactly how I feel myself in my solitude.

Veronica Aicher
Date: 8/30/2012 9:04:00 PM

Thnak you Victor. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2012 8:02:00 PM

VERONICA, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. :-) Always~PD

Veronica Aicher
Date: 8/30/2012 9:04:00 PM

Thank you! I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/21/2012 5:30:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Veronica. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol 08/21/2012

Veronica Aicher
Date: 8/30/2012 9:05:00 PM

Thank you Carol. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.

Tanya Harrington

Date: 8/20/2012 12:55:00 PM

Makes me think of the poem Footprints. I really enjoyed this one. :) Tanya

Veronica Aicher
Date: 8/30/2012 9:05:00 PM

Thank you Tanya. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2012 11:40:00 AM

I really like this one on loneliness and the way you ended on a positive note. Why acrostic? This is in couplet form!

Veronica Aicher
Date: 8/30/2012 9:06:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.

Shelley Murray-Foreman

Date: 8/19/2012 11:25:00 AM

This a lovely poem of hope. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you

Veronica Aicher
Date: 8/30/2012 9:06:00 PM

Thank you Shelley. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.