Lonely

A telephone that seldom rings
So many songs I never sing
I open the door, but no ones there
Where are all the people who say they care
The world outside keeps going by
As I look out the window and try not to cry
Where did all the people go?
The ones I love, I miss them so
Long days turn into night
It's oh so lonely till early morning light
If I could only be what I used to be
I know how proud you'd be of me
But only then do I realize
The lord is very very close by
Then as I wipe away a tear from my eye
I hear him say, my child do not cry
And then I'm happy like I used to be
Because I know he's here for me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Roberts Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 5:40 PM
really great piece you've penned here, congrats on having it featured this week
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August 30, 2012 at 9:01 PM
Thank you so much Francine. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her everyday when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It give her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.
Grier Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 12:39 PM
I know this feeling all too well. Great way to express yourself.
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August 30, 2012 at 9:02 PM
Thank you Angelica. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.
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August 29, 2012 at 7:59 AM
Bravo Veronica, Congrats on having your great poem being featured on the PoetrySoup Homepage this week, keep tapping from the incredible ink flowing from your honoured heart. Wishing you many more features in the future. Love, Adeleke
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August 30, 2012 at 9:03 PM
Thanks Adeleke. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.
Chavez Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 2:26 AM
Absolutely beautiful. That's exactly how I feel myself in my solitude.
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August 30, 2012 at 9:04 PM
Thnak you Victor. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.
A   Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 8:02 PM
VERONICA, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. :-) Always~PD
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August 30, 2012 at 9:04 PM
Thank you! I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.
Brown Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 5:30 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Veronica. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol 08/21/2012
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August 30, 2012 at 9:05 PM
Thank you Carol. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.
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August 20, 2012 at 12:55 PM
Makes me think of the poem Footprints. I really enjoyed this one. :) Tanya
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August 30, 2012 at 9:05 PM
Thank you Tanya. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 11:40 AM
I really like this one on loneliness and the way you ended on a positive note. Why acrostic? This is in couplet form!
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August 30, 2012 at 9:06 PM
Thank you Andrea. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.
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August 19, 2012 at 11:25 AM
This a lovely poem of hope. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you
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August 30, 2012 at 9:06 PM
Thank you Shelley. I am Veronica's sister Peggy. Veronica is in an assisted living facility in Florida, I am in Pennsylvania. I found this site and wanted to share her poems for her. I read the wonderful comments to her every day when I call her. She does not have access to a computer. She is so thankful for the beautiful comments. It gives her so much pleasure to know her poems are being read.
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