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Lonely

All the charms of life evaporated in thin air All the acts and deeds of prime of life behind Face smeared with wrinkles and agony of despair In the deserted dwelling facing times unkind A picture of hopelessness an image of neglect Deserted by friends and abandoned by the near and dear Embittered by surroundings, environment imperfect How can someone a falling edifice endear His soul threatening to vacate the body’s falling mansion His tongue tired of tasting the bitterness of attitude His limbs reluctant to act on the mind’s dictation His heart declining to lift the burden of solitude Jettisoning the cargo of love like a wrecked ship Like a frost bitten leaf crushed by ailment’s cruel feet Dimmed and thirsty eyes bereft of sleep The aching body eagerly awaiting its destiny meet Sintra, Portugal.16-06-2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/14/2013 2:42:00 PM
This is sad and deep, kinda hitsd close to home. Sometimes life is not fair to some people, but we have to do the best we can. Maybe make a new friend. Many blessings. Lucilla
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 2/16/2015 12:33:00 PM
Thanks Lucilla for your kind comments. I appreciate it. Love. -Mohammad
Date: 6/16/2012 6:02:00 PM
M. Y., this is very deep... and the images are sad..xox~pd
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 2/16/2015 12:36:00 PM
Thanks P.D for visiting my poem and your charming comments.
Date: 6/16/2012 5:40:00 PM
VERY DEEP,THE EXPRESSIONS ARE EXTREMELY POWERFUL!!!THANK YOU FOR SHARING DEAR POET!!!
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 2/16/2015 12:37:00 PM
Thanks Elliot for your kind comments. -Mohammad
Date: 6/16/2012 5:25:00 PM
This is a sad written poem, but very well written Mohammad. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 6/17/2012 8:33:00 AM
Thanks for your appreciation Anne
Date: 6/16/2012 5:13:00 PM
Deeply expressed loneliness...laced with wonderful metaphors...like jettisoning the cargo of love like a wrecked ship..ohh, smooth!
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