Joshua Abel Poet I do not know?

Loneliness In Hades

On thy flaming floor wailing, 
No one to comfort thee, 
Friends and families are no more, 
All alone, it's not all right, 
Nobody, to tell thy excuses, 
No one, to guide thee right,
Thy tomorrow has ended,
Forgotten that it will cease, one day. 
Thy new Earth,thou will not witness
Thy sins, thy suffering..

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Funom Makama May 11, 2015 at 8:34 AM Sweet expressions from wonderful lines which are so liberal to disallow the message stay hidden. I love this poem and it is definitely a 7 Joshua Abel May 12, 2015 at 4:13 AM Huge THANKS to you.Sir and for stopping by

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 18, 2015 at 11:33 PM An expressive work of human sin, pain and sorrow, Joshua...well-written! Hugs, Rhonda Joshua Abel March 19, 2015 at 10:58 AM Thanks for taking time to read and for the comment... *Hugs*

Emile Pinet March 17, 2015 at 12:31 PM A touching and eloquent description of the human experience in hell. Great work! Emile. #7 Joshua Abel March 17, 2015 at 3:00 PM Thanks sir