Loneliness Ii

Loneliness, creeping into my mind
Peace is something I cannot find.
I toss and turn every night
My dreams would give you such a fright.
My whole life seems to be falling apart
I wish I could go back to the start.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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August 9, 2019 at 4:40 PM
Lovely, made me sad, however. Excellent write. Ann
Timuno Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 12:45 PM
I can relate nice piece of writing
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 12:06 PM
Hello Steve Wood, yes sometimes loneliness can get the better of us. We feel we are falling apart. i do understand loneliness. Have a nice day my friend.
Kalishian Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 3:59 AM
I like the way the rhyme goes soft , very well written :)
Kulkarni Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 10:23 PM
Hang in there. Find your uniqueness. All the very best!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 5:44 AM
I have often said "I need a re-do." We never realize it until later.
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