Loneliness

evening shadows
where were you while
they crept
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Raynes Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 4:01 AM
Wow, so vivid, I like this write, I also like ur war memories write, so exact. Great stuff
Henderson Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 2:07 PM
Thanks much, Lewis. I will go back and revisit war memories.
Dietrich Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 9:19 PM
wow, this is great haiku, Charles. How have you been? Just never see you any more!!
Henderson Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Have been growing old dear.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 6:24 PM
I agree with Arthur lots of emotions in thoes 3 lines.
Henderson Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Thank you Darlene !
Vaso Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 5:25 PM
I agree with Jan, so much emotion in those 3 lines!
Henderson Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 5:39 PM
no answer to an expectation is always a sad thing.
Allison Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 4:46 PM
beautiful but sad Charles:-) I felt a chill dwon my spine reading your haiku. hugs Jan xx
Henderson Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 2:03 PM
Thanks Jan, always good to hear from you. Am trying to get settled back into the groove here, but is keeping me busy.
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