Loneliness

It's cold,  it's loud. 
It's dark, no sound.
By myself, so why? 
So lonely , i cry. 

I'm drowning, can't swim.
I'm shaking, so grim. 
So weak, can't flee.
Feeling sad, so lonely.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 16, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Karly, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your awesome words today. ~SKAT~
Onclaud Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 2:19 PM
bid cheers on your win, finely written,karly
Mehta Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 8:05 PM
Enjoyed the write on loneliness and congrats on the fine win, karly
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