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Loneliness

There inside take a look It is dark and locked I am haunted A phantom I could not fathom Oh! I feel a deafening silence. This sigh is a hook I am dangled and choked I am hunted I wish my knew was new Oh! I feel a deafening silence. I died the day you left Missing you is a gain-say My heart cannot bear this theft To loneliness...a prey.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/16/2013 5:58:00 PM
This is an interesting piece. I wish you had consistent rhymes throughout, though. "A phantom I could not fathom"--great verse.
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