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Loneliness

Lies within oneself take a toll on the spirit. Our minds degrade us, takes away any merit. Never do we realize the loneliness we shape. Eventually we blame others, with solitudes rape. Lack of love for us, others, takes control. I have seen sadness, rip up others soul. Never underestimate the voices you may hear. Each of us hears, some do not let them steer. Sadness can become a disease, within a heart. Solitude can be destroyed, right from the start.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/26/2013 3:55:00 PM
nice winning poem...........SKAT
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:32:00 PM
Hi Cecil, , congratulations on your win... always~ Linda
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Date: 9/19/2013 6:19:00 AM
Congrats!!! Sara
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Date: 9/18/2013 8:21:00 PM
Deep introspective poem, Cecil. Very true about lies, enjoyable poem overall. Check out some of mine, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 9/18/2013 6:52:00 PM
the beginning was strong, the rest was mellow almost taper off a cliff and downwards it hits the ground. any way Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/17/2013 5:42:00 PM
congrats on your fine win :)
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Date: 9/17/2013 4:54:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/17/2013 3:11:00 PM
congrats on placing with a very good acrostic Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/17/2013 2:22:00 PM
Nicely done, Cecil. Congrats on a great win.
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Date: 9/17/2013 9:54:00 AM
Lovely poem. Loneliness is pain we all fight to get through. Time does heal. Betty
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Date: 9/17/2013 9:36:00 AM
There is so much insight in this poem! well done, Cecil !!
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Date: 9/17/2013 8:32:00 AM
Hi Cecil, your muse is on the top and Congrats on your poem winning in the contest
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