Loneliness

I feel so mellow,when i 
should feel so hollow,Cant 
stop wondering about 
tomorrow....will i wake wit a 
smile,wake with brand new 
oppotunities for me to 
undertake with  full 
force....wondering if i could 
borrow...that incessant 
smile...knowing it will allway's 
be on your face even when 
life throws you arrows and 
stone's...i wish i had the skill 
to make from all these arrows 
and stones,A fortress....to 
fight my battles with 
courage....am on a lonely 
road and i commuter only for 
my love's ride's home...to a 
place were i belong...never 
forget me my love,As i wait 
for your ride from this 
loneliness...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 9, 2013 at 9:35 PM
wow~ SKAT
Sibanda Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 2:04 PM
Powerful piece. Enjoyed reading your poem.
Dante Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 1:03 PM
thank you brother...
Dante Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 6:55 AM
thank you....david
De La Croes Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 6:38 AM
Welcome Chate! You poem is full of movement and expectation, and I like it. David
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