Loneliness

loneliness
laying empty in chest
waiting for salvation from bleakness
to open this locked heart.

DOREEN CYR
OCTOBER 17,2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 9, 2016 at 12:40 AM
doreen cyr, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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October 17, 2010 at 3:25 PM
I'm really sorry for the loneliness that inspired such a sad poem. But the poem is good.
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