Loneliness

Something is missing in my life,
I feel wounded and hurt inside;
This kind of feeling is hard to bear,
I know I'll struggle just to find you there.

Just like the moon without the sun,
Light disappears as the darkness is felt by everyone;
Incompleteness is felt in the air,
As the breeze roars my cry else where.

Along the roads of nowhere,
Is an unending sorrows to suffer;
The beauty of being so left out,
Full of guilt and doubt.

As the others celebrate with glee,
I celebrate the feeling of displeased;
Where else should I go, Does anyone know?,
When will this lonely feeling of mine go?.

Though at time I learned to trust,
But was replaced with so called “mistrust”;
A laugh for joy throughout the years,
But that was before I felt this fear.

Alone so cold, no hands to hold,
Feeling of emptiness, a so called loneliness;
In the dark side of the earth and in the outside world,
“I am lonely will someone come stay with me”.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/5/2009 8:46:00 AM
You have communicated in verse truly like a sculptor ... and if this poem was a prayer, for the pure beauty of it ... there is a coming answer.
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Date: 6/5/2009 2:11:00 AM
Smile~What a truly well expressed and penned write again Julie Ann!!:)~Its amazing what one can say, when they reach into the very depths of their precious and priceless hearts and souls to say it....And as far as the loneliness portrayed within this profound write; I would not worry; for I believe that love eventually shall always find a way!!:) Again, "Love & Warmth To You & Yours, John!!":):) Goodnight ~
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