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Lone More

One more shot... One more slit... One more drop of this blood I bleed... the pain the tears the broken words I don't know why I don't how all I know is your not here now what did I do to deserve your hate? did I mess up somewhere? I thought everything was going great but I guess I was wrong... so many questions but no answers you won't answer, my calls my texts your never home I cry I bleed I never sleep I'm always wondering what I did wrong One more sip One more slit One more tear then im gone into this darkness it's calling my name... Goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/13/2011 11:55:00 AM
I am reading such diverse poems here at PoetrySoup. Poet's hearts are bleeding poetry today. That is where the best poetry comes from. It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Amber. Continue to write and share it and I will be back to read it. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2011 7:14:00 AM
We have all gone through that feeling of rejection. Very nice.
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