Lone More

One more shot...
One more slit...
One more drop of this blood I bleed...
the pain
the tears
the broken words
I don't know why
I don't how
all I know is
your not here now
what did I do to deserve your hate?
did I mess up somewhere?
I thought everything was going great
but I guess I was wrong...
so many questions
but no answers
you won't answer,
my calls
my texts
your never home
I cry
I bleed
I never sleep
I'm always wondering
what I did wrong
One more sip
One more slit
One more tear
then im gone
into this darkness
it's calling my name...
Goodbye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 13, 2011 at 11:55 AM
I am reading such diverse poems here at PoetrySoup. Poet's hearts are bleeding poetry today. That is where the best poetry comes from. It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Amber. Continue to write and share it and I will be back to read it. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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April 13, 2011 at 7:14 AM
We have all gone through that feeling of rejection. Very nice.
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