Lone Icicles

Flawless, danger thorns
One touch, blood flesh shall reveal
Sore icicle shreds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 9:24 PM
HI, Celine, I enjoyed reading your haiku tonight. icicles like thorns! ouch!
Mehta Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 8:19 AM
Nice haiku with meaningful images you have penned, Celine
M V Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 8:17 AM
This a nice haiku,Celine.I enjoyed it
Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 6:04 AM
Interesting Haiku..Frozen ice cover thorns..A beautiful hidden danger..I am glad that I chose this one to read this A.M. Sara
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